Ordyn has written the following paragraph for his rhetorical analysis: the kairos of the article was germane because it was articulated in pc gamer just days before the gamergate controversy was fully expressed. however, while the timing was opportune, the article seems far more relevant to legacy gamers than those hardcore mmorpg or fps gamers. unfortunately, since the article appeared first in a gaming magazine, the primary audience becomes gamers, who are most likely to disdain this message because it seems like a respective censure of them. that is unfortunate because the message itself is well crafted. what can jordyn do to improve the quality of this paragraph?

Read the excerpt from warriors don't cry. as we approached behind them, we could see only the clusters of white people that stretched for a distance of two blocks along the entire span of the school building. my mind could take in the sights and sounds only one by one: flashing cameras, voices shouting in my ears, men and women jostling each other, old people, young people, people running, uniformed police officers walking, men standing still, men and women waving their fists, and then the long line of uniformed soldiers carrying weapons just like in the war movies i had seen. which words create the mood in the excerpt? check all that apply.

The overwhelming majority of the peoples and nations of the world today want to live in peace

Read the passage from a raisin in the sun. mama: lord have mercy, baby. you done gone and bought your grandmother a hat? travis (very proud): open it! she does and lifts out an elaborate, but very elaborate, wide gardening hat, and all the adults break up at the sight of it. ruth: travis, honey, what is that? travis (who thinks it is beautiful and appropriate): it's a gardening hat! like the ladies always have on in the magazines when they work in their gardens. beneatha (giggling fiercely): travis—we were trying to make mama mrs. miniver—not scarlett o'hara! mama (indignantly): what's the matter with you all! this here is a beautiful hat! (absurdly.) i always wanted me one just like it! which word or phrase from the text best supports the idea that the adults think the hat is inappropriate? “have mercy” (giggling fiercely) (indignantly) “what’s the matter”