Ineed to write 2 paragraphs starting with the sentence “ yesterday was my birthday” would you be able to ?

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Explanation:

Yesterday was an awesome and exciting day. I had just gotten home from (work,school) and the moment I opened the door. A popping sound a a lot noise makers filled up the vast emptiness I felt after going to (work,school). Everyone cheered with glee and congratulated me for my _autumn Birthday. Laughing and talking I sat around my best of friends when out from the kitchen my mother appeared a circle like figure in her hands with luminescent lights. Each one for every year since I was brought on by her lovely hands to this earth.

I had a smile from ear to ear my favorite flavored cake was coming in my direction and everybody started chanting. "happy birth day to - you,  happy birth day to - you, happy birth day dear , happy birth day to - you."

My mother said with happiness in her bright and smiling face, " make a wish!"

I blew the candles and there my friends started pilling up all their presents for me on they had bought for me. One by one I started opening each one with a whole lot of excitement! I was so happy my mom let my friends sleep over and we played video games all through out the night.

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