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what is ironic about the working conditions of the animals after the rebellion?
another way that george orwell uses irony in animal farm is how the animals are happier after the rebellion even though they are doing more work. they were happier than they had “[ever] conceived possible to be” (46). this is even though they “toiled and sweated” (45) and were “met with many difficulties” (46). i think that this is because now they control everything and if they are tired, they can rest and if they feel like working they can work. even though they have to work more in the long run, the freedom of doing it when and how they want is an improvement from before the rebellion.

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Another way that George Orwell uses irony in Animal Farm is how the animals are happier after the rebellion even though they are doing more work. They were happier than they had “[ever] conceived possible to be” (46). This is even though they “toiled and sweated” (45) and were “met with many difficulties” (46). I think that this is because they can control everything. For example, if they are tired, they have the ability to decide to rest. Afterwards, once they think they're well rested, they can work again. Even though they have to work more in the long run, the freedom of choosing their own action of when they want to do something and how they want to do that is an improvement from before the Rebellion.

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)