To improve the logic and flow of the essay, the writer
should revise sentence 5 by
read the passage
(1) i think that schools should switch from using paper
textbooks to using computer tablets, (2) textbooks were
effective in the pre-digital age, but now we live in a
technology-based society, so schools need to get with the
program and adopt a modern approach to learning, (3) in
fact, the chair of the federal communications commission
said that "it's time for the next stage" of learning with
tablets and pointed out how textbooks are often out of date.
(4) opponents argue that tablets aren't a good choice
because initially they're very expensive, (5) the secretary
of education pointed out that tablets can be updated
regularly, which saves money in the long run. (6) not to
mention the pluses of having the latest and greatest info!
(7) many experts agree that switching to tablets is
important for the future of education
a)replacing the word "money with the word "dough."
b)deleting the sentence to clarity the overall argument.
c)inserting the phrase "are awesomely fast atter "tablets"
to add personality
d)adding the transition "however at the beginning to
connect the ideas better

Read the excerpt from julius caesar, act 1, scene 1. marullus. wherefore rejoice? what conquest brings he home? what tributaries follow him to rome to grace in captive bonds his chariot wheels? you blocks, you stones, you worse than senseless35 things! o, you hard hearts, you cruel men of rome, knew you not pompey? many a time and oft have you climbed up to walls and battlements, to towers and windows, yea, to chimney-tops, your infants in your arms, and there have sat40 the livelong day, with patient expectation, to see great pompey pass the streets of rome. which summary of the passage is the best? marullus asks a lot of questions, such as, “why celebrate? what has caesar done? who is following him to rome? don’t you remember pompey? ” then he says that everyone is cruel because they do not remember pompey. they forget how they praised him and would climb to the highest places, carrying their children, just to catch a glimpse of him. marullus regrets that the people are celebrating caesar and is insulted that they forgot how they used to praise pompey. marullus thinks that the people should celebrate caesar the way they used to celebrate pompey, and that they should be in awe of caesar’s greatness. marullus remembers how the people climbed walls, battlements, towers, windows, and even chimney tops to see the great pompey.