Can someone me with grammar and make it sound more professional?

I saw the planet earth as well, and I was thoroughly impressed.

It was getting late, as the moon was shining in the night sky, and they made the decision to drop me off. When we had landed, and all of them were saying their farewells in their alien language, I had a strong feeling flowing throughout my body. I felt like I was leaving the one family I had, and it was ripping me apart.

The next morning, I had expected my parents to greet me with “Where were you last night?!”. But surprisingly enough, they never said a thing about how I was abducted by those aliens. I will never forget the family I had when I was with those green people that one night.

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