In this activity, you will evaluate a paragraph in terms of the four bases of unity, support, coherence, and sentence skills. read each of the following paragraphs and then choose the one comment that applies from the box below. put the letter of that comment in the space provided at the bottom.
looks shouldn't metter, but they do
often job applicants are discriminated against based on physiscal appearance. first of all, some employers will not hire a man who wear an earring even though a woman who wears an earrings is notsingled out. in addition someone with a facial piercing on the lip, nose, or eyebrow is often treated unfairly in job market. finally some employer will not hire a person who has visible tatto yet they hire people whose tattos are hiden.
(a) the paragraph is not unified
(b) the paragraph is not adequately supported
(c) the paragraph is not well organized
(d) the paragraph doesn't show a commond in sentences skills.
(e) the paragraph is well written in terms of four bases.