My home is on the peaked sea-mark of ithaca
under mount neion's wind-blown robe of leaves,
in sight of other islands—dulichium,
same, wooded zacynthus—ithaca
being most lofty in that coastal sea,
and northwest, while the rest lie east and south.
a rocky isle, but good for a boy's training;
i shall not see on earth a place more dear,
read a student’s paraphrase of the excerpt.
odysseus’s home is ithaca, a rocky island surrounded by other islands. odysseus considers ithaca a great place in which to grow up.
what key detail should be added to strengthen the student’s paraphrasing of this excerpt?