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English, 29.08.2019 01:10 montgomerykarloxc24x

Iwould appreciate it if you could revise this sentence and make changes with order and if you describe it a different way it is okay as long as at the core it is the same. for this sentence, context is a college student just received news that her sister had a baby girl
"as soon as i got the news i shared it with my entire sorority house; leaping over couches, sprinting across tabletops, and screaming her name" if you could provide explanations for your changes, that would be great!

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