Read the passage, then answer the question that follows. scientists have studied the benefits of hobbies having a pastime reduces stress. it can improve mood, memory, and strengthen friendships. relaxing hobbies such as knitting or bird-watching reduce cortisone, the stress hormone. some hobbies, such as sports and clubs, encourage friendships, and numerous studies have found a connection between relationships and happiness. which revision best corrects the underlined sentence? scientists have studied the benefits of hobbies. having a pastime reduces stress. scientists have studied the benefits of hobbies, having a pastime reduces stress. scientists have studied the benefits of hobbies, but having a pastime reduces stress. scientists have studied the benefits of hobbies; however, having a pastime reduces stress.

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  plan: i will begin with a quotation about the importance of unity in a community. then, i will state my claim that an activity will unite our school by creating a shared vision, purpose, and direction. in the body, i will use three main points that describe the different avenues the students can take: through a variety of clubs, through a special event, or through an awareness week. i will provide evidence about other towns that have unity activities and the kinds of events that they include. pictures will illustrate my three main points in action. for the ending, i will restate the main idea in a new way and pose a question to keep the audience thinking. 

in my opinion, anyone should be allowed to marry as long as it's not going against any laws. though i kind of contradict myself because i know that in some states and countries, gay marriage isn't legal yet- hopefully you get my point.