Rewrite the passage below, correcting the sentence fragments. think that stone-aged people had difficult lives. not the case. spent less time working than we do. food for only a small part of the day to obtain enough to eat. the rest of the time they rested. or visited friends.

Think that stones aged people had difficult live.The case is not.we do less working time than spent.Food for only a small part of the day to obtain enough to eat .The rest of the time they tested .our friends visited.

  plan: i will begin with a quotation about the importance of unity in a community. then, i will state my claim that an activity will unite our school by creating a shared vision, purpose, and direction. in the body, i will use three main points that describe the different avenues the students can take: through a variety of clubs, through a special event, or through an awareness week. i will provide evidence about other towns that have unity activities and the kinds of events that they include. pictures will illustrate my three main points in action. for the ending, i will restate the main idea in a new way and pose a question to keep the audience thinking. 

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