Iwrote a poem for a contest. can you look at it and make any corrections

jibanyan is sweet jibanyan is sour but together he and nate just made a flower. you'd never think they would ever be a team. but it's all because of jibanyan's smile which is stronger than a hyper beam. best buddies together they'll never leave each other. friends forever.

just add on too that

explanation:

each year on march 8, international women’s day is celebrated around the globe. it’s an important opportunity to shine a spotlight on women’s involvement, contributions, and accomplishments on a range of issues from domestic violence to the role of women in the c-suite. the theme this year is “be bold for change”― a dictum that those who know me personally will acknowledge has pretty much been my mantra throughout my career on wall street, in media and most recently, in philanthropy.the empowerment of girls as leaders, who can be emboldened today to become even stronger leaders tomorrow, is an increasingly recognized imperative in our world, and it couldn’t be closer to my heart