Were you moved by tennyson’s lament for his friend?

For english i have to find 4 errors in each diary post

An old patched hat,which was almond terim-red, watched as it sat on an old , thin head.which kind of figurative language is found in line 1-2? a. metonymyb. oxymoronc. personificationd. simile

(01.15 lc) develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach, focusing on addressing what is most significant for a specific purpose and audience. rewrite this dull sentence to make it dazzling. sandra walked across the street.