Write a short narrative paragraph (3-5 sentences) about the day your mother made your bed with you still in it. remember that you are telling a story. use correct grammar and punctuation.

I remember as if it were yesterday that my mother Loida adopted me, it was the happiest day of my life. I was at the orphanage with my bags all packed outside the orphanage waiting for my soon to be mother. To me the minutes turned into hours, of course I was just a child; time was very slow to me. Soon enough after some time passed a black car parked in front of the orphanage and a decent looking lady with red dress and glasses stepped outside the car. Immediately that she saw me she ran towards me and hugged me. I can’t express the joy I felt when I received for the first time that warm and tender embrace. To be honest that day went by quickly and soon enough I went to bed. The nighttime turned into daylight and I remember waking up very confused. My adoptive mother Loida was making my bed while I was still in it and the sheets were so tucked in and well in place that I wasn’t able to move. “Mom, I’m stuck on the bed” I said. Loida jumped in fright “Oh my son it’s you. I had forgotten, you see before you came to this house you have no idea how many times I made your bed so it would be perfect when you came. I suppose it got stuck to me”. Never had I been so moved by that tender gesture of love.

I apologize that this story is quite long, I hope it may give you use :)

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