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toni morrison wrote a short story of one such discussion that revolved around an african girl who wished to have blue eyes. she expanded the story into her debut novel, ‘the bluest eye’ in 1970.
her next novel ‘sula’ published in 1973 was about the friendship between two girls in a black neighborhood and how their friendship evolves and changes over time. another novel toni morrison wrote was “song of solomon” in 1977 she told of the life of macon “milkman” dead iii, an african american male. the book traces his life from birth to adulthood. this book was chosen for oprah winfrey’s popular book club. she was appointed to the albert