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people misjudged jesus ministry because jesus did not come to those who are already saved but he came to sinners that were lost a bring the salvation people look on the outer appearance but god looks at the heart the people did not acknowledge the fact that christ was not going to zacchaeus to praise him or be with him because he was a tax collector. christ went and saw him because your people are as strong as your weakest link in the chain. christ showed that if people are rude or mean spirited then provide prayers, guidance, and all your love to stop their track record of rudeness. there was a bully named josh and he used to beat up little kids and make fun of them and also steal kids lunch money and everybody was always afraid of him until one day a new kid named max came to the school and when josh heard about this new kid named max he was gonna find him and bully him at the playground sometime later josh went to the playground to find max and when he found him he saw max was playing catch with some other kids and when the other kids saw josh they ran away but max asked josh if he would like to play catch with him and josh asked him why he would want to play with him max said that he wanted to make lots of friends then josh agreed to play catch with him as the other kids watch from a distance ever since then josh and max have became best friends and josh doesn't bully kids anymore

People misjudged Jesus's ministry because Jesus did not come to those who were already saved however he came to sinners that were lost and brought the salvation instead. People tend to look on the outer appearance but God looks at the heart. The people did not acknowledge the fact that Christ was not going to Zacchaeus to praise him or be with him because he was a tax collector. In reality, Christ went and saw him because your people are as strong as your weakest link in the chain. Christ showed that if people are rude or mean spirited, then provide prayers, guidance, and all your love to stop their track record of rudeness. There used to be a bully named Josh who used to beat up, make fun of, and steal the lunch money from little kids. Because of this, everybody was always afraid of him until one day a new student named Max came to the school. Josh heard about this new kid named Max and decided that he would find him and bully him sometime later on in the playground. Josh went to the playground to find Max and found him playing catch with some other kids. As soon as the other kids saw Josh they ran away but on the other hand, Max asked Josh if he would like to play catch with him. Josh asked him why he would want to play with him. Max said that he wanted to make lots of friends then Josh agreed to play catch with him while the other kids watched from a distance. Ever since then, Josh and Max have been best friends and Josh doesn't bully kids anymore.

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