While aynsley dunbar has drummed in some of the greatest rock bands of all time, his style incorporates jazz, fusion, blues, and playing progressive rock. what is wrong with the sentence? the ideas are not coordinate. it lacks parallel structure. there’s excessive coordination. it has an incorrect coordinate conjunction.

The correct answer is D.

When we put "while" at the begining of the sentence we give it the meaning of "although" and make it into a subordinating conjunction.

Since here, the conjunction is one that is used to create contrast, the second part of the sentence should be the counterpart of the first.

when alex falls for the charming new boy at school, cole -- a handsome, funny, sports star who adores her - she can't believe she's finally found her soul who truly loves and understands her.  

at first, alex is blissfully happy. sure, cole seems a little jealous of her relationship with her close friend zack, but what guy would want his girlfriend spending all her time with another boy? as the months pass, though, alex can no longer ignore cole's small put-downs, pinches, or increasingly violent threats.  

as alex struggles to come to terms with the sweet boyfriend she fell in love with and the boyfriend whose "love" she no longer recognizes, she is forced to choose -- between her "true love" and herself.

explanation:

1. alliteration

2. wistful