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what exactly does , collaborative feedback look and sound like? in this discussion, you'll work with your peers to ensure that your feedback is actually relevant and .

let's read arnold's post:
overall, i think a good guide is to focus your feedback on something specific, even if that means it's a relatively small thing. big, sweeping observations like "your organization is messy" or "i don't understand your argument" are really and overwhelming. instead, it's best to focus on one small piece of the overall organization and suggest a specific change; for example, "how about using a transitional phrase at the end of your introduction to guide the reader into your first claim? "

create one post that answers the following prompt: you will be providing feedback to peers. suggest two guidelines for the group to follow to collaborate successfully.

"the monkey's paw" is a rare story in that the theme is actually stated in the story. sgt. maj. morris tells the whites that the old fakir who put the spell on the paw said, "fate rules people's lives and those who interfere with fate do so to their sorrow." the message is a warning, but mr. white doesn't believe it. even though sgt. maj. morris makes it clear that he tried wishing with unfortunate results and he tries to throw the paw on the fire,   mr. white makes a wish for 200 pounds only to find that he receives the money when herbert dies in a factory accident. according to the fakir, then, because mr. white had wished for something he should not have had, his son lost his life.

the second wish that mrs. white encourages him to make is for herbert's return--one week after his death. when the strange knocking begins at the door during the windy night, mr. white panicks, believing that the previously dead but still mangled herbert could have walked home from the cemetary and is now at the door. because he fears what his wife will find if she opens the door, mr. white makes his third wish--for the noise to stop.

therefore, he uses his three wishes and to his sorrow, loses his son and disappoints his wife, who fervently believed that their son was at the door. she wanted him back, regardless of his condition.

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answer: yes, ive read this book! now whats the problem ?

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