1. thesis; evaluate the strength of quintanas thesis . how clear and specific is it to us?

2. details; how effectively does quintana use details to reinforce his main pointand to readers visualize key people and places? did you feel more details were needed? if so, where? which details, if any would you suggest he add or delete?

3. conflict and tension; how does quintana establish conflict and create tension?

4. foreshadowing; where does quintana use foreshadowing? how effective is it?

5. title, introduction, and conclusin; evaluate the title, introduction, and conclusion of the essay.