It was a hot dry day last august when i realized that i was tired of summer. on that day i came to the conclusion that summer days were too warm, too long and too sunny. i decided to get in my car and drive north to the mountains for some cool air which i love and shady trees. it was the best decision i made all summer. write three to five sentences explaining what should be done to edit this paragraph for errors.

To edit the paragraph, the writer should put a comma between hot and dry because they are coordinate adjectives. The word August should be capitalized, but summer and north should not. Finally, the writer should use a serial comma in the list and set off which I love with a pair of commas to avoid confusing readers.

not exaxtly

explanation: it depends on the situation like if u do something good there will be good consequences which arent punishments but if you do somthing bad there will be bad consequences which are punishements.

the answer is b:   the american composer and singer bob dylan composed many songs, by which he is very famous and considered one of the mosts influencial artists of pop music. he was awarded the nobel prize in literature for his type of poetry. but the huge impact his songs had are due to both lyrics and music, without which the message would lose strength.