Needing in english got a 30% on it her feedback hi mia, for working on this some more. i'm excited to see you develop your final draft! at this point in the essay, you should have 4 paragraphs: intro, 2 body, conclusion with your works cited. you should not be labeling sections anymore. it should be clear as your audience reads what is what in your paper. make sure you have also responded to the reflection questions in the assignment. i would still like for you to review the previous assignments and my feedback on them to make sure you are incorporating support from your research sources into both of your body paragraphs. remember that arguments rely on logos, and logos relies on research! make sure you thoroughly go through the editing checklist on page 3 of the lesson. this will you check for grammar issues. working through it step by step will be .

Read the excerpt from david foster wallace’s infinite jest. my silent response to the expectant silence begins to affect the air of the room, the bits of dust and sportcoat-lint stirred around by the ac’s vents dancing jaggedly in the slanted plane of windowlight, the air over the table like the sparkling space just above a fresh-poured seltzer. the coach, in a slight accent neither british nor australian, is telling c.t. that the whole application-interface process, while usually just a pleasant formality, is probably best accentuated by letting the applicant speak up for himself. in this excerpt, the narrator is providing a, both objective descriptions and subjective commentaries. b. only objective information about people, setting, and events. c. only subjective responses to the things he sees and experiences. d. a compromised interpretation of events due to his unstable condition.