Here the narrator bursts into explosion after explosion of thunderous horse laughter repeating that nub from time to time through his gaspings and shrieking sand suffocatings how does the word choice in the sentence reflect the authors attitude about comic stories

Can someone me with my essay? editing?

(1) fire extended humans’ geographical boundaries by allowing them to travel into regions that were previously too cold to explore. (2) it also kept predators away, allowing early humans to sleep securely. (3) fire, in fact, has been a significant factor in human development and progress in many ways. (4) other obvious benefits of fire are its uses in cooking and in hunting. (5) probably even more important, however, is that learning to control fire allowed people to change the very rhythm of their lives. (6) before fire, the human daily cycle coincided with the rising and setting of the sun. (7) with fire, though, humans gained time to think and talk about the day’s events and to prepare strategies for coping with tomorrow. the sentence that expresses the main idea is: (type the number of the sentence. then click “go.”)

(the black cat poem) where does the writer fail to support her points with evidence? what evidence from the story would you suggest adding to support these points?