What is the best way to revise this sentence? mr. heads face was long and tubelike, and he had a rounded open jaw, and he had a short depressed nose. a. mr. head had a long, tubelike face with a rounded open jaw and also a short depressed nose. b. mr. head had a long, tubelike face with a rounded open jaw and a short depressed nose. c. mr. head had a long, tubelike face and a rounded open jaw with a short nose that was depressed. d. mr. head had a long, tubelike face with a rounded open jaw and also with a short depressed nose.

i believe the answer is: b. mr. head had a long, tube-like face with a rounded open jaw and a short depressed nose.

this is because in the un-revised sentence it said that mr. heads face was long and tube-like, and he had a rounded open jaw. this is not a very grammatically correct because of how it seems to drag on with the and, replaced with, with, makes it sound more fluent in the description.

i think the answer is b

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novels have multiple settings. a setting is a place or surrounding when a main event or event takes place. not everything happens in just one scene or setting. yes, there can be one *main* setting, but there is definitely not just one. b is incorrect. novels do not have limited characters. there are many characters in a novel, depending on how many the writer wishes to add in. c is incorrect. there is not just a single theme. there are many themes. another word for "theme" is the subject. there can be many subjects and topics. once again, there are many, depending on however many the author wishes to add or include. d is incorrect. yes, novels *can* have no solutions, based on what the author would like. but typically, novels have a solution. the solution might be in "book 5", but there is normally still a solution.

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