Which revisions would make this e-mail more formal? check all that apply. removing the contractions removing the exclamation points removing the salutation removing the slang and casual speech removing the information about amusement parkscorrectremoving the contractionsremoving the exclamation pointsremoving the slang and casual speech

Once you have finished revising your peer’s essay, continue to demonstrate your understanding of grammar and punctuation by writing an essay containing all of the grammatical concepts outlined above. your essay should be short, just 250 words, and it can be written on any subject. it should contain an example of parallel structure, an example of every type of phrase and clause outlined in this lesson, an example of two independent clauses connected by a semicolon, and an example of a colon. if you are struggling to come up with an idea for an essay, consider writing it about the themes present in one of the texts you have read already.

You're playing the slots and "win" twenty-five bucks! you're stoked. during the past ten weeks, you've won another fifty bucks. but you've dropped two bucks in the slot machines every day for ten weeks

Apply the ideas of the plain language movement to make the paragraph under "before" in section i more user-friendly.