Can you me correct/finish my research paper? i will give anything in exchange as it is due here is my first draft with its feedback in red given by teacher, at the end theres also feedback.. open the word

Here is your text with the adjustments. I've erased all the redundant information, which made it easier to read. Next, I added some suggested places in which you should insert your sources.

 I haven't put the text's correction here because it exceeded the character limits.

 I hope you can continue adjusting your text and make it even better!

i think the best choice would be as follows: establishing the meaning of words in english and spanish. hope this

shean is his name and he has been a shepord for   14 years