Read this example of incorrect sentence structure. heavy, black clouds rushing in from the horizon. which revision corrects the sentence? a) heavy, black clouds rushing in from the horizon, get under cover. b) heavy, black clouds rushing in from the horizon. it’s about to rain. c) heavy, black clouds rushing in from the horizon when it’s about to rain. d) heavy, black clouds rushing in from the horizon mean a storm is coming.

It is D because once the heavy dark cloud is rushing in from the horizon it means the storm is coming in

The revision that corrects the sentence is D) Heavy, black clouds rushing in from the horizon mean a storm is coming.

The sentence is incorrect because it is incomplete. "Heavy, black clouds rushing in from the horizon" is only the subject of the sentence; therefore, it must be followed by a verb. "Rushing in from the horizon" is not the predicate of the sentence but a participial phrase working as an adjective modifying the noun "clouds". Therefore, option D) is correct because it is the only one that provides a predicate for the incomplete sentence ("mean a storm is coming").  On the other hand, option A), B) and C) leave the sentence incomplete and add another sentence (in the case of A. and B.) or a subordinate clause instead (introduced by "when" in C.).

femininity is conveyed through bernice's personality. she doesn't act how the other girls act and everyone thinks she is weird. she learns how to act in a way that was considered femininely appropriate at the time. she becomes so popular but her attempts to be liked end up backfiring when she is pressured into bobbing her hair. the author wrote that bernice cut off her cousin's hair in revenge for tricking her to cut her hair. this was the authors way of trying to change the way feminine is defined and the way women are expected to act.

what are the options?