Type the following sentence and add parentheses or brackets where needed. use exact spelling and correct spacing. add any necessary punctuation marks for clarity. the new inductee proclaimed, "it my membership is my greatest honor! " need correct answers as fast as possible.

The correct sentence should be the following:

The new inductee proclaimed: "My membership is my greatest honor!"

There are some changes made to the original sentence. First, I replaced the comma by a colon since before quoting somebody a colon must be used. Secondly, I deleted the pronoun “it” because the subject is already in the sentence (my membership). And finally, I capitalized the letter “M” right after the quotation marks.

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

who is marty in this situation?