Read this excerpt from a student’s analytical essay. the nursery rhymes that alice recites in the story come true afterward, which is really weird and interesting to me. which is the best revision of this informal sentence? some of the nursery rhymes recited by alice may be familiar to readers, because they are well-known. the weirdness of the nursery rhymes coming to life after alice recites them needs to be remembered. it is especially significant that nursery rhymes come true after alice recites them. i cannot believe that nursery rhymes actually happen after alice recites them to herself.

The best revision of this informal sentence is:

It is especially significant that nursery rhymes come true after Alice recites them.

The reason for the selection is that it is the only sentence that does not add extra information, a personal point of view about some of the information, or gives information that is not present in the original sentence.

Apart from the fact that this sentence uses proper grammar, and neutral academic language.

It is especially significant that nursery rhymes come true after Alice recites them.

Explanation:

yeah! it's really me with my homework, you should try it!

should you be the one doing this journal entry? it says "your special talent or skill". are you gonna lie 'bout your talent and make us fake a talent for you?

also this is a really easy journal entry, you can just think of a skill your good at and write did you work hard to become good at this skill (ex: drawing, writing, math, playing music, etc.) or does it come naturally (like a cool trick that you can do with your body). you can do all of that in 150 words. just try and think of a talent and even if your bad at this talent just say your working hard to become good at it.