Which two parts of this passage contain a biblical allusion

The last 2, so the ones that include Cain. :)

On kin of Cain was the killing avenged

by sovran God for slaughtered Abel.

Ill fared his feud, and far was he driven,

for the slaughter’s sake  

from sight of men. Of Cain awoke all that woful breed

These two parts of the passage refers to Cain and Abel, two brothers who appear in the Bible. Cain and Abel were two sons of Adam and Eve. Cain killed his own brother, Abel, and as a result, he further cursed the mankind.

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.