Which pair of lines in these poetic passages uses onomatopoeia? weary with toil, i haste me to my bed, the dear repose for limbs with travel tired, but then begins a journey in my head to work my mind, when body's work's expired. for then my thoughts (from far where i abide) intend a zealous pilgrimage to thee, and keep my drooping eyelids open wide, looking on darkness which the blind do see. (william shakespeare, sonnet 27) hear the sledges with the bells— silver bells! what a world of merriment their melody foretells! how they tinkle, tinkle, tinkle, in the icy air of night! while the stars that oversprinkle all the heavens, seem to twinkle with a crystalline delight; (edgar allan poe, "the bells") one shade the more, one ray the less, had half impaired the nameless grace which waves in every raven tress, or softly lightens o'er her face; where thoughts serenely sweet express, how pure, how dear their dwelling-place. (lord byron, "she walks in beauty")

Read the rough draft of a student's conclusion to anargumentative editorial.(1) year-round schooling would student achievement.(2) not so much information would have to be crammed intonine months. (3) furthermore, the elimination of long breaks,particularly summer break, would significantly reduce"learning loss" and the additional time wasted at thebeginning of each academic year to reteach previouslylearned material. (4) it is clear that year-round schooling students learn and retain more. (5) the united staleis not the only country to experiment with a year-roundschool schedule. (6) although many still claim that evidenceabout year-round school and its link to higher achievement isinconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and seethat students in these schools consistently score higher oncertain assessments than students who attend schools withtraditional nine-month calendars. (7) it is about time that wereplaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars.which best revises sentence 6 to create a more appropriate and respectful tone