Is the rhinoceros lowered its head and charged a simple sentence

Why did ponyboy fool around instead of shooting when hunting with his father? why did pony not tell dally? how do you think this shows ponyboy's character as being different from dally?

Itscome to our attention that someone has been taking extra supply out of the supply cabinet for some time now and this is not allowed the officer manager says if this continues to happen we will have to put up security cameras this will come out of the office budget there for our paychecks make sure that you're only using me budget for the for your department

Besides the revisions listed in the paragraph, what else can deepak do to strengthen his paper?