Can i get a bunch of different opinions on this job application i'm about to turn in. is there anything i should add or remove because it makes me seem cocky. i'm sure there are lots to change but i really want to get this job. btw this is a draft i'm going to make another one but neater.

it's actually a very difficult task, due to not many people can make 2 million dollars in 2 years. besides that, to the not-so-realistic ideas, you can create a business. it could be practically anything, but make it into a business that isn't that known yet, you get me? also, lets not forget about stock market. that's where all the good stuff happens. use investments at the beginning and begin to raise up your business or whatever you're going to do. as this is a very non-realistic idea, it's still worth the shot!