Ppl say my art is not reaListic :"(

This isn't school related, but i need , i'm typing a story and i want to open with an omniscient limited point of view, where a woman with ptsd is dreaming and the reader doesn't know it's a dream yet. you even have to give me an opening sentence, but an example from a book with an omniscient limited point of view would alot. if you don't know what i'm referring to. "definition of third person limited. in third person limited the narrator only knows the thoughts and feelings of one character. all characters are described using pronouns, such as 'they', 'he', and 'she'. but, one character is closely followed throughout the story, and it is typically a main character."

Which is a good guideline to follow when evaluating art

Agargoyle is like a water sport for the building