Arts, 20.08.2021 22:10 WeOwntheNight
COuld you review some of this book for me and tell me your honest opinion. I wrote it and I feel there is something wrong with it. Please be honest and give tipsâ¤
Here it is(sorry about the typos.)
âBenjamin, hop in the pool. Itâs too hot to be just sitting here. I made some fresh lemonade.â says Jazylin, our maid.
I hate days like this. You know those days where there is nothing to do. Itâs too hot and boring.
âAttack!â yells Belle, my 4 year old sister.
âWhoa, there Captain Belle! Hold your fire.â say Jazylin.
âOnly if he surrenders.â
âSurrender from what?âI ask
âBreathing my airâ
âWow, are you serious?â
âYes.â
âOk, Iâll let you blow out one of my birthday candles instead.â
âDeal. Bye measly peasant.â She says as she floats in the pool on her flamingo floatie.
âJazzy, what element do you think I will get?â
I canât help wondering. This is the 14th time Iâve asked. My family comes from a long line of masters--people with a power to control one element. My mum is an earthmaster. My father is an airmaster. My parents hate firemasters and plasma masters. A firemaster once killed my grandpa. However, the elements arenât decided by genes. They are decided by your personality. Earth is stubborn, Water is calm and passionate, Air is free and fun, Fire is wild. I know, what about plasma? Well, I'm not going to get plasma. Plasma is the only one affected by genes, and always is different. You can only get plasma if you have two parents that are fire and water;have two parents that are plasma; or are a twin and your original elements are fire and water. Very complicated. I won't get too far into that.
âBenjamin, donât worry about it.â
âBut, you know! Please tell me, Jazzy! YOu know me better than my parents.â
âI do have a guess but you will see, so don't worry about it.â
âOk, Jazzy.â I say with a sigh
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