Eee another OC!! Please give criticism so that I can revise and edit before I submit this for my creative writing class. Name: Colby Ryften
Nickname: Cole
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Sexuality: Raging bisexual (preference for females and genderfluid people)
Ethnicity: Caucasian
Identifying marks: A claw shaped scar on her left collarbone which is about 5 inches long.
Height: 5'8
Weight: 122 lbs. (slightly underweight due to lack of nutrition)
Body type: Flat with minimal curves

Flaws: Easily angered, clueless towards other's feelings, stubborn, over confident and reckless.
Strengths: Determined, loyal, and passionate.
Hobbies: Sword fighting, ping-pong, stargazing with Tsukuyomi and Lee (some of my other OC's), drawing, and playing on her phone.
Habits: Biting her nails.
Fears: Loosing, being alone, drowning and any sort of body of water (lakes, rivers, oceans, seas, and pools).
Likes: Fire, the warmth, cats, summer, marshmallows, energy drinks, competitions, music, hoodies, lazy days, cuddling, and sunbathing.
Dislikes: Loud noises, water, winter, republicans, reading, writing, public speaking, and dogs.
Conditions: Undiagnosed hyperacusis and dyslexia.

Favorite...
Color: Red
Food: Bagels (specifically the raisin and cinnamon ones)
Possession: Her military green baseball cap given to her by her dad
Weapon: Long sword
Animal: Cats
Song: Hayloft by Mother Mother or Slumber Party by Ashnikko

Other: She has been homeless for 11 years

Spotify playlist: https://open. spotify. com/playlist/54M0GskqwEAdyyIT44UDjm ?si=dc0b7529d7d542c3

P. S. The art below is not mine and I do not claim it as mine. It was made with picrew. Credit goes to the original artist!!