what do y'all think of my first song lyrics (plz don't mean and some words might be messing bc it's 4:00 am and I'm very tired) and if y'all have any advice on making the lyrics better plz tell me have a nice night or day :)​​

Those are very good lyrics!! I really like it. If you want to add a little more variety to your song then maybe think of other words to say instead of you. In the song you are talking about how this guy is stuck in your mind. Are you suppose to be talking right at him or are you just thinking out loud in the song? Is he a good or bad problem? Is he a poison or a drug?

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